16 September 2009
The poem above depicts a dark part of my life.
There was once when I felt that I was alone.
But I lived in self deception.
The first verse is about my friends being there.
(not my 09' friends.)
But not being able to help me.
The second verse is pretty straightforward.
It just means that I was afraid, but did not admit it.
The third verse has a hidden meaning.
It means that I made my friends laugh to cover up my feelings of sadness.
Thus, I hear my friends' laughter and not my own.
In the fourth and fifth verse, I breakdown.
It's the part of my life when I really needed help.
Self-deceit is once again seen in verse 5 and 6.
The seventh verse tells readers that I really am emotional.
You could say that the vision was blur due to the tears.
But if you're more imaginative, you would say that I couldn't see my future.
Or where I was going...
In the eighth verse, a hand is seen.
It represents the false hope given to me.
The last line refers to me being very very alone........
I think loads of people can relate to this poem as lots of us have such lonely moments in our lives.Erm. If you want to use it, please credit me, Stephanie.And if you like it, give a shout-out in my C-box and I'll make more poems....
Labels: Poems Explanation
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